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As far as examples for young writers go, I think the Pendragon series is a good one to look at. The main character is writing down the things that have ...

Good lord, Kamas. 0.o

Lol, actually, it was Obi-wan's name that tipped me off that the colors were gone. I got very excited at that and spent the next half hour hunting for the ...

Yes to Facebook.

Pretty darn awesome, that.

RSVP.

XD. Epic. Loved the twist. Here I was expecting this gruesome goring by lawn mower (think "The Happening") only for him to get smooshed. That's awesome, that is. So ridiculous ...

Silly Sare, no one's going to hate you just because you have some ideas on how to make YWS better. :P Actually, if you have some specific things in mind ...

Just a bug that's been about off and on since the New YWS got put up, but the second pages of blogs doesn't always exist. Sometimes it skips to what ...

Just to repeat the others and be an echo for a moment, excellent job on the emotion. I actually don't mind the rhythm/brokenness of it, as I think it adds ...

Snoink -- nope! Very awesome, Nate.

Sweet deal.

Ah, wait. Maybe the thin brown stringy thing is the tail, while the dark purple-ish strip is part of the sash. Maybe it is a monkey? But it looks like ...

Ack! I clicked the spoiler. If you need to explain something to your readers, it's usually a sign that you're doing something not quite right. If someone went on and ...

Is that what that thing is? I thought it was a funky shadow of some sort. In fact, that's the part that has me the most stumped.