LowKey

Aw. I can't see you Not Me. :( How will I ever know if my cartoon of you is accurate?

I bet theres a vampire in their somewhwre, and you're a twilight fan.(probably) If you haven't already, you should read Dracula. *That* is a vampire novel worth reading. That's also ...

Supergirly stuff? Psh. I'm currently reviewing a story written by a girl which involves the main character's blood being sucked out and replaced with some completely new stuff (apparently a ...

Still here. ^_^

He put his books, manuals, and manuscripts on the shelves, and they now occupied most of the given space.[/quote] Tense switch. He tried no to feel guilty as he stood ...

Fur-ry cute things you. :P [quote[He walked up to the person, who he saw on a name tag she conveniently had, was named Ary- excuse me, Lilah. He then said, ...

I sent this to my mom, who thought it was brilliant and sent it out to the staff, which, when one takes into account who is on this staff, means ...

Naterlee. Purple or blue?

You don't need to put them all in this chapter. :) Character changes aren't all that good, either. Don't change him, strengthen him. Give him more opportunities to say something ...

Hey-ho, 200! Sorry for the lateness of this review, was busy with building computers and getting them to work. I'm here now, though, so here we go! They were simply ...

Pretty please? :)

Hullo, Night! Pretty good hook here for a story. I like how you didn't say the word 'vampire' at any point in the prologue, and still got it through with ...

Ah... yes. The waitress. She irked people last time, too. I'd get rid of her, but that means there's that much less of a description (the check, after dinner, end ...

Cool dude-- Got you taken care of. 200, you're up next. Sorry I've been away. Had a mess of things going on over here, so was limited in my critting ...

First off: Sorry this so late! Had some issues on my end of the world that soon blossomed into yet more issues. Dragged me way for a bit. In any ...