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I can't judge if your characters are undeveloped or not, because of the brief descriptions. I can tell you that the bit of plot you provided (half-demon needs to kill ...

Awesome! Sorry I didn't see this before. >.< But at least you have some information for next time? Maybe? Ack, oh well. Congrats on the essay though! That's really awesome! ...

Of the options available under that category, I actually think renewable energy might be the most interesting. Could pull a bit of history into it. Dunno where you are in ...

Ack, no one covered the colors or basics of anything! I'm almost ashamed of the purps now. Purple People are instructors! The give long critiques, go as in-depth as you ...

Blonde hair, blue eyed wizard. Marylyn Beading

"Who wants to study fish?" ~ Ryle "I find starfish fascinating, myself. I'm thinking of making it my symbol." ~ Gale Soup or salad?

Hullo Max! Swimming's awesome. I've been swimming since before I was born, and my mom has the scar to prove it. Love the water. On any teams? No fantasy? What's ...

Bye Merry! Good luck out there in the real world!

keep wanting to say 'impossible'. "Impossibly fast... Impossibly strong.... Impossibly in love with him... Impossible to go back now..."

"Critiquer" is not actually a term; "Critique" is one of those trick words that can easily fool the mind into thinking you would add an r to make it nominative, ...

Allo Cat! First off, there's the Knowledge Base up there ^^ right under Resources. It has just about any topic you could want to include in a class and still ...

Even if it's just in my head, it helps me get things straight. When I have things clear in my head as to what's going to happen, I'm able to ...

"Alex? Oh, I like that name. Alex Beading, I think. Has a ring a bit, don't you think maybe?" ~ Grace *raises eyebrow* "And here I thought you turned your ...

"Ah the concept of self. What is the 'Self', right? Take it away, Ryle." ~ Marylyn *shrugs* "As I stand, I'm happy with how I am. If others think to ...

Psh. Leave it to Pork to ruin the fun. Party-pooper. Good ending though, I must admit.