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Opening scene: a teenager whose heart has just been broke (we assume) and who is now contemplating suicide (again, an assumption, but this time reinforced by the title). Cut to ...

She could not scratch nor could she bite, 8 syllables here For the chains of responsibility towards his family bound her with might. 19 here She huffed and puffed and ...

Goodness, AM. 0.o Pretty poem! But a little on the boring side. It doesn't appear to convey any message right off the bat and seems to have descriptive words running ...

Love the choppiness here! Works very well with the subject at hand, as does the repetition. However, the part where you repeat but not really, where he comes to life ...

I don't mind the extra spaces between the words, personally. It all depends on the feel you're trying to give your readers. I put a very very slight mental paus ...

Technically, Snow doesn't turn read with blood unless there's heaps and heaps of it in one single spot. But seeing as these things tend to spread out, unless she gutted ...

That is a weeeeird poem. But very poetic. I have no idea what it's about, and it does sound rather whimsical, but wow. Very interesting. It might be just the ...

Love the idea! Very original. I like how it comes full circle. Kind of makes me wonder what his parents were named, lol. I don't have much in the way ...

Cheeeeeaater. XD You're too awesome Aet.

Just to re-emphasize a bit, poetry doesn't need to rhyme. It does, however, need to be poetic.If you sacrifice the latter for the sake of the former, it's not really ...

Just a bug that's been about off and on since the New YWS got put up, but the second pages of blogs doesn't always exist. Sometimes it skips to what ...

Liv -- ah, no, I read that wrong. I see what you mean now. My fault for misreading. :) But it's definitely an idea that can be considered later, after ...

Instructors and Greeters will, but all others will need to be nominated. Purps and Blues have already been nominated/given the award, and because this isn't the annihilation of a system, ...

I also am quite fond of what Kyllorac suggested in the other thread about the additional color in place of purple and blue for people to go to if they ...