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I wanted to slap him so bad . That should be badly. Sorry, that's all I could find wrong in this piece. Anyways, I can't wait until the first chapter ...

Sorry if I'm filling up the Fanfiction forum. If I am, yell at me. Tehe. Not sure if I like this chapter[especially the dream part]... but I'll post it. There's ...

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Ohhhh! I get it noww ^.^ I was mainly confused on this character Corrigan. And yay! Chapter nine is out :D

Also unlike the creature from my dream, I feared him. The thing smiled at me as I fumbled to move to my feet. It seemed as if they just did ...

I like this story, I do. But you're kind of confusing me. :smt102 Explain more in chapter 9? Yay! :smt005

*Gold stars* Although I love Twilight, this was hilarious! :smt005

I'm going to give up on this story. I got bored with it, and I wrote it a while ago. But, do check out my fanfiction and review? Thanks ^.^

Yes, a Twilight inspired story. Also, anyone who hasn't read Twilight--just so you aren't confused--Charlie is her father. She normally refers to him as Charlie for some reason. Charlie also ...

My head.... Oh, god, my head.... Since you put most of your thoughts in italics, this should be in italics too. And what I see nearly rips my heart out, ...

Thanks for the review, xLogan ^.^ Hmm I'll try to find a way to slow it down :D

This is just to see if any one likes it. A small preview. Reviewing is fine too :elephant: “Adoption day!” a girl excitedly shouted. “Really?” a soft voice asked. “Yes!” ...

Another boy reached out to take my hand, but I pulled away from him. “C’mon, baby , don't be like that .” It just sounds better that way xD “Good ...

“ Um , yeah. Congratulations. Just keep your back to yourself.” Yes, I know, it's just a spelling error xD. Later, when he let go of my hand and put ...

Bare with me here, this is my first post xD. One peanut after another. They were too salty. I think you should combine those two sentences... they're both pretty small ...