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Re: Bluffing - Chapter 5
Yay yay yay! :D I've been waiting forever! [: Keep writing, I'm in love with this story!
Jul 2, 2010 -
Re: Supporting without Support Chp. 1
Thanks for the review! :] Oh to answer your question, I meant he didn't know what to say--I'll fix that. Thank you. :D
Jul 1, 2010 -
Re: Supporting without Support Chp. 1
Before you read: This is really long, sorry! I might split it into two chapters, but I don't know. Title ideas and reviews would be awesome. Thank you! :smt003 “I—I—I’m ...
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.8
“Princess Anita! Oh my, we must appear to be fools, don’t we?” the girl said . “Please don’t mind us. We are only eavesdropping!” a giggling girl said . “Molly! ...
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: Daflintonian (Edited, yay!)
Please, please review this. It's a schoolwork and I need help with it. It's only aloud up to 3 pages so that's why it's not so detailed, but please help! ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Addictions (2)
Shisu and TBS--thanks for the reviews :D Portersrose--thanks for the review, and to answer your question, I don't really know. I was thinking of doing something like an original quote ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart Chapter-3
I like this story so far--besides the grammar and spelling mistakes. Others have already pointed that out, so I have a suggestion. Wouldn't the cops be suspicious of Tim...? I ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Addictions (2)
I might change this chapter completely. I don't know... I changed it five times already. :lol: Once I had finished taking a shower, putting on make-up, and straightening my hair, ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Will critique everything ...
Hey, Standard! Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my story in romantic fiction? It's called Addictions (1). Here's the link: I'm going crazy, it has at least 96 ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: one hundred and two shades of green 1.1
Six years before. no later than 2 months ago Are you going to use digits or spell out the numbers? Choose one. Normally, you spell out the numbers, but it's ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Addictions (1) -Edited-
The title is temporary. Also, I know most stories like these are written by 18+ people, but not if I know enough about it. Anywho, enjoy and review! :) “I’m ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Bluffing - Chapter 4
I lid down on the bed That should be lied. “This could get interesting.” I thought. Maybe you should put the thoughts in italics--just a suggestion, though. Anyways, I love ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by a nut
Can you review "Roses by the Lakeshore(1)"? It's in the romance forum. I had one review from Snoink and she gave me a heap of help so now the chapter ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: My Hero
*The names are changed for identity reasons. Also, this is not very long, but I didn't want to include every detail. 4th through 6th Grade for Sara She used to ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: Roses by the Lakeshore (1)
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