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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Chronograph

    This was very well written, and your tone is very defined. I thought it was sophisticated and mature sounding. The biggest thing you could improve on is the description. What ...

    Jul 14, 2009


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
— Unknown