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Re: Diplomacy
This next poem is the latest from the scrawl of my algebra notebook. I really love it, and I don't know why. I guess I love it because it is ...
May 12, 2006 -
Re: Why is Shakespeare so flippin' sweet?
I love Shakespeare for his lines. Reading all of his sonnets can be quite tedious if you read the whole volume at once, but you can see a logical progression ...
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Re: Lost Forever
I absolutely LOVE your description of his eyes. I took the liberty of adding some commas into the quotation here. It is the only thing I could find wrong with ...
May 12, 2006 -
Re: Newbie Here!
Hi. There is never enough poetry in the world, and therefore never enough poets. Hope you feel welcome. Now off to see your new work. :D
May 12, 2006 -
Re: Divining Catacombs (Edit: Second Draft)
I like it SO much better now that you have a second draft. It's light, and airy, and despite the fact that the story is sad, the poem doesn't strike ...
May 12, 2006 -
Re: Divining Catacombs (Edit: Second Draft)
It is an interesting attempt at classical verse on mythology. I like it. I will admit shamefaced I got a little lost in some parts. It reminds me of my ...
May 12, 2006 -
Re: New Playwriter says Hello.
Playwright. Yay. I like acting, and so naturally I like plays. Break a leg for me. :P
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Salve
Hey. Cool. I've always wanted to learn Latin. They don't offer it at my public school like they do at some. There isn't enough budget nowadays... so I took 5 ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Allow me to introduce myself
Hi. nice to meet you. WOW. A whole novel. I'm speechless. It took me forever to write my short story for school. I went way over the page limit, but ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Denim sheets and twin sized mattress
Denim Sheets and a Twin Sized Mattress? It's a really good title, but a title that I sincerely believe would be nice on a better poem. I love the title. ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Mercy Burning
Thank you for the input. My biggest literary downfall was the epiphany one day that when writing, one does not have to use perfect punctuation and grammar like I was ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Infatuation and Ethereality
By far the best poem in my opinion I've read lately. I really like it. You're a far better poet than me.
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Mercy Burning
I hate existententialism: the way it smears the colors, the flowers like Monet in more of a sunset horizon that hinges the dark and light between us into ink stains ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: The Opportune Moment
An optimistic poem. Even diehard pessimists and realists (i.e. me) can apreciate it... Most of the time when I talk about opportune moments, they are ones that I drastically failed. ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: "the other one"
It was a very good poem. As I am a fan, I can't help but draw a mental link to the Phantom of the Opera because of the guy in ...
May 10, 2006
