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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Diplomacy

    This next poem is the latest from the scrawl of my algebra notebook. I really love it, and I don't know why. I guess I love it because it is ...

    May 12, 2006
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Why is Shakespeare so flippin' sweet?

    I love Shakespeare for his lines. Reading all of his sonnets can be quite tedious if you read the whole volume at once, but you can see a logical progression ...

    May 12, 2006
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Lost Forever

    I absolutely LOVE your description of his eyes. I took the liberty of adding some commas into the quotation here. It is the only thing I could find wrong with ...

    May 12, 2006
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie Here!

    Hi. There is never enough poetry in the world, and therefore never enough poets. Hope you feel welcome. Now off to see your new work. :D

    May 12, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Divining Catacombs (Edit: Second Draft)

    I like it SO much better now that you have a second draft. It's light, and airy, and despite the fact that the story is sad, the poem doesn't strike ...

    May 12, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Divining Catacombs (Edit: Second Draft)

    It is an interesting attempt at classical verse on mythology. I like it. I will admit shamefaced I got a little lost in some parts. It reminds me of my ...

    May 12, 2006
  • Welcome Mat Re: New Playwriter says Hello.

    Playwright. Yay. I like acting, and so naturally I like plays. Break a leg for me. :P

    May 11, 2006
  • Welcome Mat Re: Salve

    Hey. Cool. I've always wanted to learn Latin. They don't offer it at my public school like they do at some. There isn't enough budget nowadays... so I took 5 ...

    May 11, 2006
  • Welcome Mat Re: Allow me to introduce myself

    Hi. nice to meet you. WOW. A whole novel. I'm speechless. It took me forever to write my short story for school. I went way over the page limit, but ...

    May 11, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Denim sheets and twin sized mattress

    Denim Sheets and a Twin Sized Mattress? It's a really good title, but a title that I sincerely believe would be nice on a better poem. I love the title. ...

    May 11, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mercy Burning

    Thank you for the input. My biggest literary downfall was the epiphany one day that when writing, one does not have to use perfect punctuation and grammar like I was ...

    May 11, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Infatuation and Ethereality

    By far the best poem in my opinion I've read lately. I really like it. You're a far better poet than me.

    May 11, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mercy Burning

    I hate existententialism: the way it smears the colors, the flowers like Monet in more of a sunset horizon that hinges the dark and light between us into ink stains ...

    May 11, 2006
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Opportune Moment

    An optimistic poem. Even diehard pessimists and realists (i.e. me) can apreciate it... Most of the time when I talk about opportune moments, they are ones that I drastically failed. ...

    May 11, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: "the other one"

    It was a very good poem. As I am a fan, I can't help but draw a mental link to the Phantom of the Opera because of the guy in ...

    May 10, 2006


Let yourself be silently drawn by the strange pull of what you really love. It will not lead you astray.
— Rumi