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Re: Hurry hurry hurry hurry
I got it! Yay!
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: Hurry hurry hurry hurry
My username and password doesn't work, nor does the instructor one. Help meee. :[
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: Snacks n Sips
I started off thinking I wouldn't like this, but I did :] So yay, my first critique in months will be on something I liked. First off, let me start ...
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: Snacks n Sips
I started off thinking I wouldn't like this, but I did :] So yay, my first critique in months will be on something I liked. First off, let me start ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Anything...
I... but, he didn't need to... Huh? This story left me terribly confused and distraught, but in a good way! Now, let's review this, yeah? "So you're definitely sure you ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: There is no guarantee...
I do still have reviews I owe, but nevertheless, everybody's free to request again. I haven't received any requests in a while, and I'll be more than happy to review ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: I trip over sidewalks
I'm not a natural at poetry, so it'd be nice if you critiques could forgive me for this work. Many lines seem forced and the wording at times seem odd, ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Uh, something i've been working on, not finished just yet.
Raspberry skies floating above each day Shining golden in the sun The start to your song is very pretty, and as a song it would be lovely to hear. On ...
Feb 26, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
This is a picture of moi, but if you really want to see what I look like then you should just check out my Youtube channel, because I need subscribers ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: The User Below You...
I'm not too fond of that show, actually. The person below me has waited until the day before to finish a project, big or small.
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: The User Below You...
I sort of am tired. The person below me does not speak french.
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Love?
The first day of every college or school year is a momentous event for my mother. She gets all worked up about it and half the time ends up crying. ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Where is a good arcticle on past/present tense?
I'm in the middle of a critique, and I want to recommend a good article to her, but I can't seem to find any. Suggestions? Thanks! ~*Sara*~
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Gentleman's Club ~ One
In the early 1800s a group of young men, decided that they needed more in their [s]life[/s] lives . There is no need for the comma, and what are you ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: There are no men on Young Writers Society!
Has anybody noticed that many of the boys have like, 200 posts and 12 reviews? I find that amazing! How can that be possible for any kind of human being? ...
Jan 29, 2009
