LoveableLittleSock

Broken glass... so creepy, but you make it so deep! I love who you worded this entire poem. You stick with your subject and make it more meaningful with every ...

I totally get it. Your father passed away. Your famliy ate at the wooden table, where you and your father spent most of your time bonding. LOVE IT! So catchy. ...

In the deep, lonely forest, the birds sing their solemn serenade. A string of wind blows, heaving a burden of stories. OMG. BEST FOUR LINES IN THE FRIGGIN WORLD. Birds ...

You did a great job on this! Although - you said mothers wombs are liquid havens... like oceans teeming with life. I thought you said water was death... so that ...

Oooh - the rhyming was pretty. I liked it. "You're the only comfort that fits." I was like, "AWWWW." The clock ticks 12:35 My phone tells me 12:32 On with ...

I wanna laugh. Was this poem supposed to be humorous? limbs quake and fingers hurt from the non-stop tap-tap-tap at the keyboard. I liked that stanza. Its clever how you ...

Oooh - nice poetry. I liked your use of repetition. Fairly clever. Can't we stop the madness? Save the people from the sadness Life needs to go on not end ...

I like the cake similie. I feel the same way! Cakes are not meant to be cut! You have to take like, 15 pictures of the cake THEN cut it. ...

Wow - I enjoyed your poem a lot. But I didn't get the last part as much as I should have... For the pearl’s alias is “Sorrow Stone”, And, though ...

This poem is very bland, are your words are very.. boring. I'm sorry. I don't want to be mean :) You probably tried on this, but the truth is it ...

I'm so confused it's not even funny. Why did the older freak try to kill him? WHY DOES HE NEED CHOCOLATE? 'Cus it taste good? That may be reason enough ...

Sounds like me and chocolate... You used "the man" a lot. Try to use another way of referring to the same character. You spent a lot of time making fun ...

How Shall I put this into words? My feelings as simple as 1, 2, 3 Your gorgeous ocean eyes sparkle as you smile The locks that sit on your head ...

Pablo was so great, I know to be with him was fate. Aww, that lines flows so good with the poem His sweet brown eyes, and the way he had ...

Wow - that was so beautiful. I like how you said how the wind was a man and he was so gentle... aww... You are such a talented poet. I ...