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Re: The Awesome Project
Noah stiffened his muscles as he laid flat against a hard, wooden trunk, careful not even to scratch the bark with his fingertips. An elder gentlewoman and a younger lad ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: Raining Eyes
Down my cheeks my eyes rain, All of my aching pain, That's gathered after all the years, Tears of happiness, joy, and fear. First off, I think you should change ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: For you
Hello hello hello hello :] I liked this poem a lot, I thought it was very clear how you felt about whom you were speaking you. It flows really well, ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: I'm Gone
Hi! I think you definitely have a knack for poetry, and I'm not going to comment so much on the content and meaning, as I will on the rhyme and ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: The Awesome Project
Approved ;D
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: The Awesome Project
(Fixed.)
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: The Awesome Project
Noah Eying the port warily, Noah heard the water lap up against the boat's sides, droplets freeing themselves into the air and landing on his cold, pale cheeks. He stood ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: The Awesome Project
:D
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: The Awesome Project
When are we going to start?
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: It's Embee!
I go crazy when a guy holds a door open for me xD Hello Embee, I'm Sara, how do you do? My inner editor talks incessantly as well - nothing ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: The Awesome Project
@LittleSock: Does Noah live in Haven? Yup yup, indeed he does.
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Second Chances
Jaw clenched, I turned up the radio , as if it would keep him from noticing me. *Lady GaGa drowned out the sound of my windshield wipers keeping the hail ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: The Awesome Project
You're right. Edited! :D
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: The Awesome Project
Name : Noah Species : Human Age : Early twenties Gender : Male Occupation : Thief; Assassin Starting Location : (Haven) Hanging around the port Appearance : A man of ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Lost and Found
Hallo hallo :3 How are you today, sweetheart? Let me first start off that I'll be paying attention to little technical errors, so don't be afraid when you see a ...
Apr 25, 2010
