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Re: What isn't a good critique?
This is now my bible.
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Treasure
~ Amber "Colt." Amber stammered, glancing over at Kelna hastily. "Right, right." She told him, not wanting to go against his orders. She bent over and picked the sopping mop ...
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Re: Name the Character Above You
Coleman. A young, attractive 16th century male bartender.
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Treasure
Alright, I'm pretty new to story-booking, so bear with me here. Plot: This story is in the 16th - 17th century, around the golden age of pirates. Feel free to ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: How do I delete a topic?
I have a story in the Advanced Critiques section of the site, and I have to totally rewrite it because its god-awful. The problem is, I don't know how to ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Make a Story :)
This story is getting so elaborate! I love it! Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Pirates
Okey-doke people. I'm writing a novel. Got like, 50,000 books from the library and reading up on everything there is about pirates. I wrote the worst 10 pages I've ever ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Samuel
From what I can see, you had a brother that died at birth I suppose. You formed your clues in a very nice, poetic way which was clever than outright ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: "The paper burns..."
I can *tell* that this poem in pretty awesome, seeing as how you're always so... professional-ish. But I sort of didn't understand some of it. Like, it rhymed and such ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: The Pits
Name: Joyce Age: 17 Gender: Female Appearence: Dark brown bob with striking green eyes and slender figure (obviously, with food scarce) History: Former criminal, convicted for multiple robberies of co
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: delete
1 she lived in the deep south and her stomach was starting to swoon. it was a long sunday afternoon when she recalled to her parents how she made love ...
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Ever Wonder
Naster of indecision ~ AH. SORRY. I knew you had to use your own characters! I knew it! I just hate making up my own. I feel conceited.. when I ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Be You
I walked along the sidewalk, kicking a pebble in front of me attempting to have some rhythm. The pebble moved to the side and out of my reach, totally ruining ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Be You
Name: Sara Age: 14 Gender: Female Education: Freshman Year Family: 2 Brothers, mother, father in florida Appearance: Dark Brown Bob (Hair), Average Weight, Fairly Short (5 foot 1 or 2). ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Trapped...
Awww. I don't wanna make up a character. FINE. I'll be a creature. I don't want to risk making a stereotypical teenager. Jorge Age: 26 (18) Gender: Male Breed: Werewolf ...
Mar 13, 2008
