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Re: Treasure
Amber ran her hands through her hair, not knowing how she felt at the moment. Beautiful, kind, and sweet. Those were traits, not feelings. So she's a cool person, is ...
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Re: Treasure
Amber approached Colt and saw him looking her way. "Did you need something?" he asked. Amber nodded and opened her mouth to speak, pointing her finger in his face. He ...
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Re: The Ultimate Storybook (1)
Oh!! I love my plot! I can't wait for this to start!
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Re: Treasure
Amber glared down on the floor of the deck, charging toward the cabin where the hostages were working. She attempted to knock on the door politely, but the banging overwhelmed ...
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Re: Tiffany Ariel - Part One
A strong light spilled through the blinds, resting itself onto the flawless face of a young girl. Her long-lashed eyes fluttered open, and smile played across her lips. Sitting up, ...
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Re: Names
I'm going to to my favorite names, because I'm cool. Firsts Female: Amber Hayleigh Ashleigh (I love the eigh) Sara
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Re: Treasure
I have a new character!! His name is Cook. Whoo. Name: Cook Age: 20 Eyes: Brown Hair: Dirty Blonde Weight: Slim, slightly muscular History: Used to be a pirate but ...
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Re: Treasure
The cook worked under the ship, serving eventual meals to all the members of hte crew. Surprisingly he was quite a young man, a couple years older than Amber, but ...
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Re: Treasure
**Ha, in the middle of french. Don't say anything: Shhh.** As he took his fingers off her chin she felt a sudden longing for him to touch her again. She ...
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Re: Treasure
Amber was speechless. Completely and utterly speechless. She pursed her lips and opened them slightly, sucking the sea air into her lungs. "Thank you." she smiled slightly, looking up into ...
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Re: JUst Wondering...
Ai-yi-yi girl! That story scared me! But I must admit, I really liked it. Incredibly symbolic, and the poetry was so, hah, pretty. Like roses! The language was great. How ...
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Re: Treasure
Amber took a deep breath, holding her hands within each other. "How.. can you.. tell?" she asked hesitantly, unable to deny her curiosity much longer. "I mean, Colt." she breathed, ...
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Re: Desolate Hearts
Wow. I mean, just wow. I'm racking my brain for something negative to say. Let's first get past the positives. First of all, phenomanal in the language department. I first ...
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Re: Treasure
"You know he likes you, right?" Amber blinked. Velna shook her head, continuing to mop the floor. She smiled slightly, her eyes wandering over to Amber's expression. "There anything shocking ...
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Re: Treasure
Amber stared at Colt in confusion. "Isn't there..." she sighed and threw her arms in the air, groaning with frustration. "Forget it." she grumbled, and stomped back into the cabin ...
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