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Re: hi
Hey Bunnie! It's fine if you type slow, it doesn't matter. You're right - as long as your writing, everything is awesome. Why don't you tell us what you like ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: Critique Shop - Open
Alright! I have something for you guys! It's an entry for JFW's contest. Erm, if you could skip over the cliche vampire-ending thing, that would be great. I was uncreative ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: I'm Hungry...
JABBAH!! Hola! I have an entry up for JFW's contest, and she extended the deadline, leaving me more time to spruce of the entry so I can win! *laughs maniacally* ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Tender Talon Editiong Services
Hola! I have no idea what it is. Fantasy-ish, because of the vampire bit at the end. I know, I know, one thing is "killing cliches," and I'm fully aware ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Critter seeking something to procrastinate with.
Critique this? It's my contest entry for JFW's contest. Don't mind the cliche ending with vampires - I was too uncreative to think of anything else. And, you know, if ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: The Shredder
Mr. Falcon, would you be so kind as to critique my entry for JFW's contest? If you give a line-by-line, I have cookies and 70 points waiting for you. So, ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Poor Imp's Poor House - Poor No More
Hola! If you could rip this to shreds, please do so. And don't comment on the vampire ending and how cliche it is - I've come to that realization as ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Critiques by Monki
Second! Yays! I'm not sure what kind of fiction this is, but it's not fan, fantasy, action or science. So I hope I'm safe. Anyhow, this is an entry to ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Critiques all around!
Hey! Wow, you really want some business, huh? I'm happy to comply! =) Would you mine critiquing this? And be incredibly harsh to the point where my protaganist is on ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Critiques like blades, cutting up (yeah, yeah) your story!
Hey! This is a entry for a contest JFW1414 is holding. I was hoping that you would be able to rip it into shreds? I hate the ending - it ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
For Teh Wozzinator: Wrong on everything? So, dark skinned, large build, brown eyes and black hair? dancingsprite: Blonde hair, green eyes, average build.
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Things Left Unsaid
Sorry for being so late! I remember reading this, but I suppose I never got around to critique it. Anyway, shall we begin? Twelve years since I last saw her. ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: On End
Alright people, this is an entry to the “Side Characters Contest” JFW1415 is holding. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* My back began to ache as I sat up and ran my hand through my ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: The Twins are Twenty!
I'm eight days late, but Happy Birthday! I had no idea you two were twins. I thought you guys lived on separate hemisphere's or something. Happy Birthday Grif and Snoink!
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Rate the randomness above you!
..'kay. 6 outta 10. The birds outside sound like squawking rabbits. I didn't know rabbits could squawk.
Jun 14, 2008
