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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Loneliness-really short please read!!!

    I do believe that you've expressed your opinion/feelings and that is great. But it could still use some work. Maybe if you used more sentences...More detail. But hey, that's just ...

    Dec 6, 2009


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