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Blinded outline

I'm writing a book called Blinded and I need help checking and rewriting it to make it great.
  • Blinded Outline

    I need help to make this story better. I need help seeing what needs to be edited.

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The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price