LoveOnTheFringe

A year of roses and movie nights I really can’t remember a single fight All that’s stuck in my mind today Is how I can make him stay? I guess ...

I think you are confused. This forum is for lyric poetry, not lyrics. There is a seperate forum for lyrics, lyric poetry is poetry that shares a musical effect when ...

Excellent! I love your choice to make this a short poem because the lesson is so simple and so poignent. Excellent. But just because I had a couple rough reviews ...

Cascading reams of oceanic foam, Reflecting the unretracting, still expanding freedom, That brews in the eyes of divinity like you . The emotion of euphoria was identical in scope, When ...

Sitting in geometric rows, Of flesh and blood and mind. Is the hope we long to know, The creative ties that bind But the sterility of the surfaces. And continuity ...

From this users BF: I usually can't understand poems to save my life, and I understood this one, and even had a ryhme scheme as I read it. Very Well ...

The changing of a ryhme scheme CAN work and it has been utlized, but it is difficult to pull a reader into a poem when the first stanza has no ...

I do agree with the previous poster in the sense that both the repetition and symbolism of "be sorry for that broken tree was stimulating." I think if there is ...

As the Canonized and ordained Refuse the virtues of a progressive grain Lasting salvation, in this, is wrought While from the pulpit, passion is fought For the final feighed dance ...