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I agree with the others. A lot of the rhymes did sound forced. I felt it was not really original at certain parts, and that the rhymes were vey cliché ...

For some reason, when it said "Let the rain fall" I thought of Hillary Duff. 0.o Scary. I did feel like the chorus was repetitive. It reminds me something but ...

It made me think of Alice and Wonderland. I don't know why. It was very well written though, and not cliché at all. I don't know if that was the ...

I did feel like the rhyme scheme was a little forced, but other then that it was ok. It was a bit unoriginal and had a few cliché phrases, but ...

Is this to be apocalyptic or something? Or was it fantasy? Either way I liked it. I felt the rhythm you were keeping went well, and I also felt that ...

I really liked it, but it was a bit short. I would have liked to have heard more, but other then that it was really good. Good job.

I really liked it. I kept trying to figure out who it was, but it made sense in the end. It was a very spiritual poem. My suggestion is "&&" ...

Life Life and love, Hope and loss, Dreams are here, But they cost. Picture perfect, If you make it so, There are all sorts of choices; Choose the way to ...

And how does that make you feel? By Josh Harris 4/1/08 The cast Samantha-The Psychologist Mary-The Friend Bill-Prince Charming Jill-The Daughter Betty-The Nut Brian-The Brat Sherry-The Mother Act one