Love2act4ever

I agree with the other two. This just does not strike me as peotry.It's not even free is more like a prose if you think about it. It could be ...

*Sings* WELCOME TO THE YOUNG WRITERS SOCIETY! *Sings* Ehm, now that I have broken glass, welcome! I'm Love2act4ever, or Josh, and I am kind of new too, but I decided ...

Oh wow Danielle, I really liked this. I agree with Suzanne on this one. You should write the chat conversation like a chat room. You could even use different colors. ...

Well done. I felt the rhyming fit, and I didn't think it was too forced at all. I really liked this line, Baby, you try to justify, to moralize, to ...

I really liked it. Your title dragged me in. I was, in a sense, very curious to read this, and it seemed so different from the title. It was good. ...

I agree with Rykun7, and I can also relate with same situation. People are going off to college and it's a scary thing for some. These years determine what we ...

Sweet! Harry Potter's great; I actually read them for the first time this year. I own all the movies and finally decided, "I can't just NOT read the books," lol. ...

ROCK ON Me trying to be gangsta...

The Mask Why do I even try, to run and hide? Do I think that salty tears would not abide? Why do I run from fear and anger and hate? ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Eh. I failed...

I felt it was very repetitive. That is not always a bad thing, but in some cases it works and in some it doesn't. I felt like it didn't but ...

This poem is good and it's also very potent. There's just one thing that confuses me a little. You switch tenses part way through a sentence;- I fall, he won. ...

The trees are blooming their bright flowers Under the sprinkle of spring showers. They open their eager faces up to the sun With the winter's cold long since gone. Wow. ...

It was a little bit of a cliché at parts but it was short, sweet, and to the point. However, I do agree with Vernon. There wasn't much emotion in ...