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Re: Questions Only
What makes you think the forks and knives are for the Coke? Who eats pizza with a fork and a knife?
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: danced the skies on laughter-silvered wings
Hello, everyone! So this is a place where I can come and talk about myself without anyone telling me to shut up? Oh! Me like! :wink: What to say, what ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: About something
Wow. This was really good. I loved the imagery and descriptive words. I loved the twist at the end, and how the whole piece flowed. It was very well written. ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Edited! YWS
This is much better then before. I could not really read it before. It is very well done, considering that you made that in paint. I can't do anything when ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: The Quoting Game
Quote this. Because I'm goody-two-shoes. You get a dime. Prok gets no dime. This is my third attempt. Please, no one beat me to the punch this time. EDIT: Yay! ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Hello, all
Welcome to the site! You are really going to love it here. I am just letting you know to read the rules, write 2 reviews before you post your own ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
It's a Shakespeare quote! It is my all time favorite quote, because I am an actor. 8/10
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: The Mask
Thank you all for reading it. It is funny how you can be so mad, that words just come to you, and you have to write them down. I felt ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Emotional Haze
I agree with some of the other reviewers. Use spaces to make it seem more like a poem. Also, it was a bit confusing. I guess different people can interrupt ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Hive Mind, Own Will
This sounds like a rap with a lot of unnecessary cussing. I am grateful for the warning and all, but not all rated R pieces have to have 10 curse ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
I really liked this. I felt the flow was very smooth. I also felt that the descriptive words you used, brought out the imagery through you words. It was very ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Imperfection
Remember that you must write 2 reviews before you post your own work. Here is what I thought about your poem. I really liked it. It had a few forced ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Get back on the horse
I really liked this one. I too, felt the rhymes where not too forced and that you used very descriptive words that could paint a picture in our minds, which ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
Um, it was a bit confusing for me. 7/10
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Making A Killing
Yes, well, then do let me know what will be in store for this. It is a really good start to something new, and I think you can go far ...
Jun 4, 2008