LoudandProud

Name: Tahlia Skyse Age: 18 Gender: Female Personality: Quiet, Sporty, Innocent, Jumpy, Nervous, Easily embarrassed, Fun to pick on, One of the Guys. Appearance: Thin red curls that flow just ...

HEY! First of all I loved it. You had good description which painted a picture. Second I found a few run on sentences which can be easily fixed. Third I ...

HEY! I thought that this had a good plot but it was confusing because of the text "wall." I think I would break it up into paragraphs to make it ...

1.) I thought that this poem was sheer guenious! The line What news is worse than that of death? was brilliant! 2.) It took me a while to completely understand ...

Hey, hey, hey! I really liked these. I think I'd work on the focus and the pictures aren't "top quallity" per say. But they're nice. I like the way you ...

HEY! I really, really , loved reading this. It gave a good clear picture and it can relate to alot of people. I'm super glad I found this and was ...

The audition room where dreams come true tears may fall but not from you. You stand with the judges, that royal court, and pray that your voice does not fall ...

I lie there each morning, innocently sleeping, when my silence is ruptured, by a horrible beeping. My peace is gone; now it's loud and spastic, all because of this evil, ...

Hi! I don't write to much poetery but I do enjoy reading it. I liked the picture you were trying to paint, but I think it should be a little ...

Prologue The heroic prince swept her off her feet and they rode on his beautiful white steed into the sunset. That's how every story of a princess goes. But for ...