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  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Gollum inside

    Hiya! I like the metaphor you've used with the gollum inside of us all. [ He’s selfish, He’s alone. For me the repetition of "He's" doesn't work on the last ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Distant Moon

    I sketched a sketch to trace a face that clearly mirrors my own, palm to palm in my memory, my fingers to you are sewn so tightly, knuckles whiten, forehead ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Lilies and Swine Chapter One, 1st draft

    This is very much a work in progress, but I would really appreciate any feedback and opinions on it, thanks!

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Lilies and Swine Chapter One, 1st draft

    I opened my eyes spitting dust out of my mouth and pushing myself into a more upright position. Swaying slightly I stared into the hazy horizon, an orange sun just ...

    Mar 21, 2010


I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25