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Re: The Gollum inside
Hiya! I like the metaphor you've used with the gollum inside of us all. [ He’s selfish, He’s alone. For me the repetition of "He's" doesn't work on the last ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Distant Moon
I sketched a sketch to trace a face that clearly mirrors my own, palm to palm in my memory, my fingers to you are sewn so tightly, knuckles whiten, forehead ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Lilies and Swine Chapter One, 1st draft
This is very much a work in progress, but I would really appreciate any feedback and opinions on it, thanks!
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Lilies and Swine Chapter One, 1st draft
I opened my eyes spitting dust out of my mouth and pushing myself into a more upright position. Swaying slightly I stared into the hazy horizon, an orange sun just ...
Mar 21, 2010
