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Lothbrok

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Mordred

    I've always been a fan of twists on the Arthur tale, such as Mists of Avalon and the Warlord Trilogy, and this one did not disappoint. The opening paragraph had ...

    Jan 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: His Majesty's Assassin (working on the title)

    This seems like a really solid beginning to what looks like an interesting story. The charactisation is good do far with Zane looking like a could end up being a ...

    Jul 10, 2012
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The War

    I liked this overall but I would recommend breaking up the story as a wall of text can be quite daunting to some and if you lose your place it ...

    Jun 29, 2012
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Scott Rosenberg: Boot Camp

    Really liked this story especially this line. "The retort of the aptly nicknamed 'Hand-Cannon' was as thunderous as if the wrath of God himself was being brought down upon the ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Zombie.0

    Overall i enjoyed the story as i've always been a fan of zombie things, though i do have a slight quibble with this line “Oh my God! What was that? ...

    Aug 26, 2011


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