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Hmm... there's some things that could be improved upon, but you certainly have lots of potential :) I've decided to do a line by line critique, as I feel it ...

I've done yours Maki Chan

Hi, I'm back, so I may end up accidentally repeating some of what I've already said, for which I am sorry. Anyway, let's see: I like the style. It's original. ...

Hey Monki :D I had this dream. I was on my bike, just pedaling, frantically looking for something. I don't remember what it was. Maybe I didn't even know what ...

Kirsten - Why are you so kind? You're always such a considerate, complimentary critiquer, and to be on the receiving end of one of your critiques is such a warm, ...

Okay, I liked this poem. I'm kind of tired just now, so this review may not be of the best quality. Let's start: I watch the beauty of the stallions ...

Something to critique from my dear Lauren. Why was not I told of this before? I second your proclamations of being being a grammar geek, because you are, which is ...

I like it! It intrigues us and makes us want to read more, I especially love the first line :D I'm going to post the same one again. I am ...

This is gorgeous :D Really, it is quite magnificent. I don't really have much more to say than that. Just that it really is very pretty and deserves the title ...

WARNING! Some of this may contain graphic or obscure things that may not be suitable for children. Prologue "In which we meet two men, the shepherd and a lamb." “Murder ...

the second am in I am olivia is meant to be italicized 8)

Quite interesting, not exactly my kind of thing, but I do like it :D I am Olivia. I am Olivia, I do proclaim my wishes to one day bear the ...

Wow Holly, this is incredible :D Everything about it is perfect; the shading, the bone structure, the spacing. Everything. I love how there is an almost cartoonish thing about it. ...

hah I love it, although I'd be slightly creeped out if that was in the same house as me, do you keep it in your room? Lol, it's just the ...

There's an advert for the curious case of Benjamin Button that looks exactly like this! I really like this sketch. Now, positive things first:- *The bone structure is absolutely incredible. ...