Lost_in_dreamland

Galerius, I've done yours. xD

Okay, at first I thought this poem was about a dreamer, the books &c. This was furthered by the line that reads "of the beasts will electrify only your flesh ...

Hey Galerius, here as requested. Sorry it took so long. I really, truly adored this poem, indeed I probably use that line too much but seriously, I loved it. Now, ...

Glasgow :D

Aw, Lauren you're awesome 8) and really pretty. :D

Hey there, you're fairly new so... Hi. You can't post this here I'm afraid. You'll need to either post this in Advanced critiques or break it down into small parts ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS :D TeddyBear has already explained our two main rules. You'll love it here, everyone is helpful and generally fun to be around. The 'site ...

Actually, just ignore my review, I thought it signified something it didn't. A tree. I like it as a tree, it's the correct length &c. The meaning is nice and ...

Hey writersblock (: I'm Kirsten, and welcome to YWS :) I guarentee you'll have a great time here. xD YWS can be a bit hard to understand at first as ...

Hmm... no reviews? I shall review :) Nit-picks/ comments on your piece first, the overall comments: A monk meditates in the morning light As far as first lines go yours ...

Let's see... nitpicks first? [quote]Stairs. Stairs? There are many stairs. So Do you think too would work better here? On second glance... no, no so works just fine. many stairs. ...

I will too :D

I've owed you a review for a long time, and it is time you got it, even if I am slightly late, lol. Okay, [s]rip to shreds?[/s] Fix the few ...

I really liked this poem, I wouldn't say loved as I think that's a term that's too lightly tossed around, but I certainly enjoyed it. The imagery was beautiful *Will ...

NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED name: Basically any variation of my name; lost, dream, dreamland or just Kirsten :D age: 13 what you write: historical fiction, perhaps some romance, but generally not ...