Lost_in_dreamland

The first thing I've written in months, I'm rather proud of it, but I'm sure once everyone's torn it to pieces it won't be quite as good as I initially ...

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Hey there Krupp. I have a habit of picking on random pieces to review, so that's how I came across your piece. Please excuse me if I miss out a ...

I'm back; Atmosphere You built up a most wonderful atmosphere here. It truly is beautiful. I warn you just to be careful not to ruin it though, some of the ...

Hey there, I like to pick on random pieces, cease them for several five minute segments and then throw them back at the author. Please excuse me if I miss ...

I'm back. Right; I rather enjoyed this poem. It was light and impulsive, and not intended to carry any deeper meaning than it appeared on the surface. That said, I ...

Hey there, Serendipity. xD This poem was an interesting one. I believe this to be a short, fun poem, written for no other purpose than for the fun of it? ...

Colleen, I've done yours, it's not particularly good, but... Any more?

Hey there, Colleen. I'm going to do a quick run over of the actual piece, and tehn we'll get onto comments, 'kay. I'm sorry if I accidentally miss out letters ...

I think I'll just do a quick over view of your work, what I like about it and what I don't like about it. I'm not a great artist myself, ...

Right, I'm back. IV This one is supposed to be extremely poignant and strong &c. but, I don't really like it. A lot of people will, but I don't. It ...

Hey there, Shini ;) I'm currently trying to improve my art & photography critiques, so I hope this is a slight improvement upon my previous ones. Anyway, onto the critique: ...

Hi Dearie, welcome to YWS. Well done for doing two reviews before posting a piece of your own work, it's fairer for everyone that way. Now, I enjoyed this poem, ...

It wasn't ready yet, so I'm back to review :) Now, there were a few grammar errors that I didn't catch, and a few phrasing errors that I didn't catch, ...

Hi world be very afriad, that's a bit long, perhaps I could call you WBVA? Anyway, I am here to review, seeing as no one else has. I'm glad to ...