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Thanks so much Sarah :) you're too nice! hehe I didn't mean to put Iwho in there! :) thanks :)

There is a house down the street. I don't think you need that first sentence. Just start with the next one. The grass is overgrown, the windows too not to ...

I love it :) It's so true. To the person that said most popular people are not that horrible - actually most of them are (or at least the one's ...

overeasy thanks. I know it's really unorganised - it's pretty sketchy and doesn't make much sense. I didn't mean to put it down as a poem - I just couldn't ...

Thanks so much Ninja Z :)

[/b]A slightly ambiguous if not somewhat sketchy jotting that I wrote in five minutes. An example of my terrible attempts at poetry! Almost philosophical yet rather ambiguous. Make what you ...

Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 8:12 am Post subject: Breakdown (Helpless) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Anyone familiar with Heartless from Action/Adventur

"I wouldn't do that, if I were you." I love that starting sentence. It throws us into the story and immediately makes us intrigued as to what the character has ...