Lost_in_dreamland

White snow fell from the heavens as they plunged down into odd shapes and sizes onto the cobblestone streets of London, but no one knew that murder was going to ...

Hey Sarah. I love broken. So I've decided to edit the entire thing :lol: it might take me ages but it's well worth it :)x

Hey (: Anyone want me to review anything? Because I kind of like to review things! Please don't be offended if I'm slightly harsh, but if it's good, you'll get ...

Hey :) not sure if you're still looking for pieces to review but if you want you could review my prologue: It is ridden with mistakes and is probably an ...

Sarah (:

You speak Latin ? :O Wow! I would love to speak Latin, don't ask. I am just strange :lol: Someone said they didn't like the Bronte's (sobs) :'( I guess ...

Thanks Sarah (: I know there was loads of mistakes in it, I haven't edited it yet :lol: one thing. When you say there should be a question mark after ...

She should have known better. Great way to start as usual Sarah (: That was the thought that echoed through her head as she stood upon the hilltop, the dry-gold ...

[b]Ok, there's probably a load of mistakes, I'm just looking for some opinions. Thanks :) My name was Adelaide Molyneux, my grandparents being of French descent. I was a young ...

No way Sarah XD :) I have no poetic-ness (not even a word but oh well!) in me. It's more like a rant than a poem ! (mine) x

The wind is suspiciously strong tonight, the rain dancing with the charming darkness in a sly and sinister step. Oh Sarah! You dare to say you're not good at poetry. ...

Aw thanks Sarah :) Na, I'm not too nice, you're just too good :) I love your new (well, it's probably not new but I've not noticed it till now!) ...

Sorry, I accidentally posted a review with no review on it :lol: She lets go of the balloon. Wow! That's an amazing way to start the chapter. As usual Sarah ...

She lets go of the balloon. She’s standing on the cold stone of a bridge, balancing her weight on the edge and leaning over precariously. She shivers from the encounter ...

yip! happens all the time :) x