Lost_in_dreamland

Hey there :) I come with a promised review :lol: if you've got anything else you'd like me to review, just tell me ;) x We got in his car, ...

Thanks Merry! :lol: It kind of got a tad messed up, at first it was going to take place during the first world war but now it's kind of more ...

Ok; I'm not a fan of twilight but I do love this picture. All the artistic people can give you critiques but seriously I was in hysterics when I saw ...

Gosh I am stupid! At the bit where it says sometimes there are only colours and pictures I thought it said sometimes there are only words and pictures :lol: x

I'm terribly amateur-ish at poetry, being a beginner. Feel free to tear apart. :twisted: You are not Sarah. You are not! :) ______ Forgetting all other things I take to ...

Sarah dearie :lol: I have reviewed chapter 1 and a poem called paint factory or something (Sorry that's probably completely wrong!) :lol: I've got to go now but I promise ...

Wow! I'm the first person to review this. Unusual ;) x Jackie was highly aware of the bronze-haired girl seated beside her, a veiled madness hidden beneath her pretty features. ...

Hey there Sarah ;) They told us to look away from the flames, to ignore showering silver and mandarin green settling on our eyelashes. But we didn’t. I adore that ...

Thank you for those who have been helping me with this story. Your criticism really helps me out, and I appreciate it. I wouldn't know what I would do without ...

II - Raindrop I love your titles, they're so apt. She's being followed. Great beginning She can see them watching her as she walks along the rough cobblestones. She doesn’t ...

This is the second part of a true story. It needs a lot of work. I know I've alternated between past tense in the first part and present tense in ...

Author's Note: I needed to let this out of my system. It’s the first story I’ve written that’s based on my life. Thanks so much for reading Hello Hey Sarah, ...

Hey :) This took me ages, hahahah :lol: I hope it helps you x Pain wasn’t something I had asked for. Torture wasn’t something I asked for either. Pain and ...

Done it Demeter, it was great ;) -Kirsten xxx

Darkness wraps me inside Ever, ever again Its soothing power holds me tight Why in the name of Lord, why? It won't let me go, still I feel free But ...