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When I say it's not particularly good I mean the review, not your piece. xD

seven Hey there, another random piece I have chosen to review, and I stumbled upon you. xD Now, let's see... I really enjoyed this piece. Many things contributed to this, ...

six Welcome to YWS superboii57, here we have a rule that for every piece you post you must review two pieces. That might be why you have no reviews on ...

five Hey there Princess, I'm Kirsten, don't think I've formally met you before, so hi! Anyway, I'm going to go over the actual poem and then a little critique, okay: ...

Like... please, p'r'aps ? :D

Eh... this is set in England in around the 1820s, and from what I've gathered people used a lot of 'rathers' and 'perhapses' at time, and children were very formal, ...

Four Hi, welcome to YWS, I'm Kirsten and I shall review this piece for you today. Note: This is rather short, in future you may want to expand on pieces ...

Three Hi there, I like to pick on random pieces to review, and yours happened to be the one at the top of the page on the random generator thing. ...

two I'm trying to do one hundred reviews in five days, so that's the reason for the number. xD Okay, I liked this poem, it is one of those light ...

one Evi! Looks like you are to be the first in my hundred review thing. ;) So, shall we stop this pointless chatter and do some reviewing? I think I ...

Wow. New Zealand/ American/ Canadian/ wherever you live beaches are very different from British beaches. xD I really like these pictures. Anyway, I have to go and get some lunch, ...

Hey there Kamas, you asked me to review some of your stuff, so I come to humbly do so. xD and please excuse me if I accidentally miss out a ...

Okay, about the characters, I'll try and comprehend them a little for you ;) The 'he' is the protagonist. He's the one the whole piece is talking about. The 'she' ...

Aw, thanks so much Rosey. xD I haven't really any idea about this piece, I have no idea how it was written or anything. Basically, I think the lack of ...

Could you possibly review this for me, Demi? :D I will most definitely return the favour, just remember to bug me about it. xD ~Kirsten