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was just thinking, and this thought came to me. I don't know if I'll do anythign with it. Critiques are hugely appreciated!! * * * * * * * * ...

Pleasant View, Colorado November of 2002 Everyone thought they had me figured out. Fantastic opening line, so intriguing. I could almost hear their thoughts when I walked into a room… ...

Sorry for double posting :twisted: -Kirstenxx

I made this to help solve common problems when writing and to help my critiquees :lol: It's inevitable. You're going to get stuck at some point, whether it's just on ...

The spacing has to be this way) ( The spacing on microsoft word, when copied and pasted here, makes the spacing all weird, sorry!) ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* A necklace is all th

This is a novel I have just started, set in 1920. I didn't want to put it in historical fiction, though, as it covers multiple genres. If anyone has any ...

Ah Charlotte; I quite remember you, that solitary little figure, I remember your shadow well. How delightful to finally be properly acquainted with you.

Hello and welcome to Loville. I take it upon myself to welcome you, I be a mere shadow, you would be surprised at how much you may observe if you ...

I've copied and pasted this here so that I can go back and edit later, I don't have time just now, but later I'll do my review on this post ...

I've done yours rascalover ;)

11:11am The room was a nauseating site, full of antiseptic smells and bland colors with bright whites. I like this opening sentence, it draws us in, maybe it's not quite ...

If you want an indepth critique visit here please Ok I'll review anything I'm bored, I have a lot of time, I want to review. Got it? Good :lol: My ...

I was six years old. How terrible it is :lol: it was entitled: "Mr Blombry and the Shopping trip" Only I have works from every part of the day "Mr ...

Hey there ;) Welcome to the family XD You like the Book Thief? I love that book *high five :lol:* Two main rules: 1. 2/1 review cycle 2. No chat ...

Ok; I'm not too sure about the forums but writing you gain points for reviewing (you get more if it's longer) and you lose points for posting :'( If you ...