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Help :lol: anyone have any suggestions on how to improve this piece ?

Author's Note: Apologies for the length of this piece! But I found that i really can't shorten it! Please, again, critique. It is much needed and much appreciated. Miss Adrianna ...

Sock ->> I am admin, overseer of all this domain. The proper question to ask is, "What do I not know?" Is it just me or is that sentence somewhat ...

Maybe guys are more image conscious, and don't come on writing sites in case their friends find out. Or maybe they lack the ability to use google ....? *muses* hahahah ...

I have something, but it's very long so take as long as you like ;) Don't worry if you don't get round to it:- It's called Orli and Eden. -Kirsten ...

Ok; where do you read? Can you read anywhere? Do you have a specific area? Personally; I have an abnormal longing to go into the attic and read there. It's ...

Thanks for the review Nate ;) Eden's maturity is really important to this novel because of something that happens later, so I'll maybe change her age instead of the way ...

8/10 or the script ;) I got a brand new ipod for Christmas :D one of those mega thin nano chromatic ones, with the amazing shake to shuffle thing, and ...

Ok; Zelda, I have no idea what that is :lol:, so I have no idea what the characters look like :lol: I love the shading, can I ask, underneath the ...

Aw; it's really cute ;) You're good at drawing, I can't draw to save myself :lol: The only problem I can see with it is the expression, which people have ...

Wow, I do love your style. It's original and different. I liked a lot of these ;) Seriously, you can draw hands :lol: they are amazing. I love the camera, ...

I'm sorry to hear that she passed away :( but she is adorable ;) 1: I like this photo. The only thing that I think destroys it is the white ...

I really like the first and second one. The first is a pair of scissors cutting a piece of wrapping paper. Am I right? Heheh lol :lol: I agree with ...

Wow :shocked: you are great at taking photos ;) You must have a natural eye. No seriously though, the first couple look holiday brochure standard. Let me explain more clearly, ...

My parents would kill me if I did something like that- I'd probably get paint everywhere same :lol: ! I really like the second, they must have been amazing fun ...