Lost_in_dreamland

This is miles better than the first piece I read by you. It's very long... let's see how far I get... First of all. Communism? In Germany? Nah-uh. Germany was ...

Heheheh that reminds me of a time in maths: Teacher And the answer to question number three is ......... (scanning the room before pointing a bony finger in my direction) ...

Deleted. Thanks so much for the comments ;) N/B It was deleted because I have to hand it into school :( xxx

Deleted because I needed to hand it in to school :( Thanks to all who helped ;) xxx

I’ve grown used to the sound of the bombs. Each one echoes in my mind with a constant thrumming. I scratch my chest, and the mud caked on my skin ...

wow. This was powerful and well written. You had the perfect amount of description without having too much. You really made me empathise with Elsa, and you. Powerful and moving, ...

personally think the angle makes it look like it's being advertised in a jewelry magazine, which isn't bad *pouts* Dreamer, you stole the words from my mouth :lol: It really ...

The hair is really good ;) You've got the shading right, and everything is perfect. On the face the proportions are great, everything's in the right place, you just need ...

1. I really like how you see the spear of sunlight passing through the tree. It's really nice xD I do like this pic, it works well ;) 2. Ok; ...

Stella for tattling on me :lol: and for writing amazing stories ;) and for being awesome :D

Tall and thin. Dirty blonde (the shade :lol:) hair, blue eyes.

Face Engine wrote: Lost_in_dreamland wrote: Maybe guys are more image conscious, and don't come on writing sites in case their friends find out. I'm terrified of my friends reading what ...

I'm reading it just now. Only, I haven't started it yet :lol: so basically; is it good? Did you like it ?

Sometimes more than one character speaks out of my mouth and I have three people participating in a conversation. I must do this alone or risk being thrown to the ...

Ok; my critiques are going to drastically improve :lol: so expect some big changes. I'm only going to accept ten a week, so they will be very indepth, although I ...