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I am totally coming ;)

Hello Helen xD My reviewing system might seem quite strange at first, but it's easier once you get used to it :) The numbered parts are mentioned at the bottom, ...

Hey, I figured it was about time I posted one of these. My name is Kirsten, but I much prefer my middle name, actually, I don't like my middle name, ...

write more xD Get blue stars *raises hand*

I really like the first one, but I do agree that it should be rotated. You are really pretty xD really, really pretty. I love the contrast between teh black ...

So, I've finally managed to work on characterisation. I haven't worked it into this chapter explicitly, because this is where something finally happens, so it would be silly to suddenly ...

Eurchh, I know this chapter is probably a bit too soppy and lurv-filled for some of my faithful readers, but trust me, teen-romance is not going to be the objective ...

Kirsten - Hmm, I wonder who urged forced me to put this up, eh? ;) *Looks around nervously* *raises hand* Yes, it was I, but look how much people like ...

Sarah. This, was incredible It truly was. Helen's state of mind, her constant questioning of herself and the world. Everything. It's perfect. To think that you wouldn't have posted this. ...

Sunshine! *hisses* It's always really pretty to do so but, in my experience, seriously blinding - reflects off the pages and burns my eyes/face. Although in England, maybe the light ...

Chapter 1 Sitting alone on a bench in the back of the classroom, I was longing for the sweet, sweet days of April and May. 1 They were absolute paradise ...

Hey there tkonchady ;) You're new so you probably won't know this. If you have a whole novel to be reviewed you put it in advanced critiques, this means that ...

Ducati ;) If you need anything else to review could you review this ? *pleads* It is kind of long, but nowhere near as long as the original xD It's ...

Thanks so much Kallilope xD It needs serious work :lol: And I really have to work out how to develop the relationship between Adelaide and Marcel better :lol: Thanks so ...

This is very experimental. I would never have posted it were it not for someone. *coughs* But I lubb her too much to decline. I accept all credit ;) I ...