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Re: Coins
Aw, thanks so much for the review Gryphon, you rock. xD Hehehe i couldn't think of a title :lol: I shall change it tomorrow but right now I really need ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Couple in a Cafe
Eeek, I clicked submit by a mistake :lol: However, I think you could expand on this. Where do the man and lady come from, more than that, where are they ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Couple in a Cafe
Ok, it might seem boring. But it's not claiming to be a masterpiece, I liked it, you obviously had fun writing it. Anyway, without observation we'd be terrible writers. We ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Coins
Aw, thankyou so much for the reviews :) The her is someone totally different, but I'm not sure who :lol: yes, it is very confusing, thanks for the reviews xD
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Coins
Okay; I have no idea what this is. I usually write rambles set in the 1800's and I never write this sort of stuff. I have no idea of the ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: The Classics and Philosophy thread
Everyone seems to hate Charles Dickens! *bursts into uncontrollable tears* Me doesn't hate him Sarah. Me just doesn't love him as much as some people love him, Methinks he is ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Orli and Eden (2)
Aw, thankyou Lauren, you rock ;) Me and semi colons have slight *disagreements* to say the least :lol: The chapters are very unorganised hehehe :lol: basically, it needs a load ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter One
Here is the first chapter of my new working project, and hopefully not a total disaster =P. Yay, I'm the first to review, but I probably won't be :lol: I've ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: A dead man's last wish
Okay, I liked this. It was very mournful almost an elegy. However, it lacks imagery. Give it some imagery and it'll be great, use some figurative language, similes, metaphors etc. ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: I'll Fly Away
One of my problems with this poem is I don't really like how you formatted the stanzas. I'm not sure if you were trying to mimic the poet you mentioned ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Madness
For Castlesinthesky's contest, I picked picture number 7. Aw, I love Sarah ;) He had been thrown unceremoniously into the cell, landing hard on the cold stone floor. James tried ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {ten}
Sarah, I demand you tell me what happens next. Utterly demand it. Beyond demand, I completely order you to do so. I shall not be silenced. Fine then, I recruit ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: 'To Kill a Mockingbird'
I cannot explain how much I love that book. It was the first classic I ever read and I just love it so much. I am a firm believer in ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
Kirsten! I will so totally kill you for saying nobody likes Jane Eyre. It's one of the best books ever written! Lily! Eeeks, did I phrase that wrong? :lol: I ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Article 1.
This is rather...philosophical. But to be a philosopher we must not only question, but have opinions too. So it's very well to question things and ask of this world the ...
Jan 1, 2009
