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Clo, Medusa and Silver You rock ;) ahahahhahahah, Sarah, you're only winning by 2 :p I shall win !!! I'm going to put that in my sig actually :D

Thankyou Fire and Jfw, you both helped me. xD Fire - Jfw was right when she said it was meant to be a rambling narrative, she was right. ;) Thanks ...

eeeeeek >.< Maybe you should edit the spacing, it is very hard to read because there is no spaces between your paragraphs. This is probably why you haven't got any ...

I really liked this. The depth was refreshing in comparison with some of the work written these days. I love depth in writing, philosophy and thoughts, I adore them. There ...

This is good photography, but it's hard to see. From what I can see you have good light conditions and such. This does look like a good photo, but it's ...

I really like these. xD The first one:- -The shading is amazing. I adore it. xD -The proportions are a bit wrong. Eyes are meant to be an eye-length apart. ...

I loved this chapter, Sarah. You have the perfect balance of imagery, emotive language and description. It's perfect. Your characters are well developed and interesting. Furthermore we found out more ...

'tis only 400 words and is in other fiction *pleads* xD xoxo

400 words other fiction 8) Kirsten shall be eternally grateful ;) and she needs to catch up on those TTV chapters she's missed *Scampers off to do so* x

Okay; I'm unsure as to whether to carry on with this piece, it just randomly came to me the other night. It's in Other fiction: it's very short, only around ...

Hey there Hassan, you were the random piece that was up the top of the page, so I come to review. xD We leave tomorrow morning!" I have a hatred ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS, even though you've been here for a pretty long time now. xD You are the random piece of writing that appeared at the top of ...

Hey there, Evan, I shall be your reviewer for today. You have no reviews? I'm here to change that! :D Okay, comments are at the end, just now, we'll get ...

I loved this poem. It was so philosophical and thought provoking, but at the same time it was an enjoyable read too. At first I thought it was about old ...

See, this is a really sad poem. I think it could be incredible if properly executed. You've got the bases of a good poem, but in some ways it lacks. ...