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I'm not going to do a long poetry critique, so I'm just going to go through some random stuff. Let's start with quotes. xD Depleted comma I am comma So ...

Hey there, Cat :) You were the random piece at the top of the screen. xD Kinda later than the other reviews, but y'no. :D [quote]I drew a smiley on ...

Gorgeous, Saaaaaaaarah :) xxx

yay! You remembered to make the eyes an eye length apart. xD This really isn't a bad picture at all. It does have potential, it's just not perfect but art's ...

I is here to do a terrible review :P Standing alone Tommy liked to stand alone. When no one was watching, he’d pull a photograph from his pocket; it was ...

Finally I am here ;) I'll try and make this long to make up for taking ages to do it :( So, let's start :) General impressions I loved it ...

Back :) This time I'm going to concentrate on setting, so I shall start with the first setting and work onwards. Shall we start? :) Quote Scene is set in ...

Finally I have started this, and I'm sorry about taking so long. xD I've decided just to start again from the beginning, seeing as my first critique wasn't very good, ...

Hey again, Tabith ;) 1: Great contrast between the green and red. The ladybird really does look like one of the drops of water, on the latter they are beautiful ...

wow, thanks everyone. xD The lips need serious work, but I'm just going to leave them, so once I've drawn more I can see how I've improved, etc etc. Thanks ...

'kay, I'm back :) So, let's run over some of the basics... Imagery This is a point that I think could really make your story. Using imagery would vastly improve ...

Well, there's quite a lot of spelling errors. Methinks you might want them pointed out so I shall do two critiques. This is the first one, which is simply a ...

Thankeeee, Sarah. You rock ;) xxx

Thanks, Monki :D Yeah, I have problems when it comes to the shading of lips, it doesn't matter though, this was only a sketchy practise thing, nothing of any worth. ...

Gal, you're on the list ;) I should have it posted for tomorrow hopefully. xD