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Hey, I really like this picture for a number of reasons:- *let's start with the bottom, shall we? I love the texture of the ground, the tractor wheel mark on ...

Shina :D Kirsten here, to do the first of your eight prize reviews, lol. Anyway, seeing as this is meant to be long, indepth and actually good we better get ...

canislupis thanks so much for the review :D I had to take it down because it might be included in coursework which is sent to the national exam board, anything ...

Hey :D This is a lovely poem, it's so charming and cute (: Really beautiful. Now, shall we? I remember when the world was new, Right, I really love this ...

Hey there Midnight (: I really enjoyed this poem, I love the Romeo and Juliet theme. Now, onto the poem:- Teardrops fall with the rain, I like thiks as a ...

Okay, no one has done a whole story review, so I'll do that first, and then I'll do overall comments: It snowed one winter. Quite an unusual year that turned ...

Hey Evi :D I've decided to review something of yours, 'cuz I love your stuff (: I'll go over your poem first then comments Butterflies used to dance all around ...

hahah :lol: Personally I think it happens to be rather incredible :lol: And yes, I'm trying to steal a review from this :twisted: sparkology? :lol: I can imagine this as ...

Hey there, Kirsten here, I second Jon's kudoses for trying something different. :D Anyway, let's go over the poem and then we'll do the comments. xD Beautiful, Silver, Humongous Birds, ...

I've not been on YWS in a while, so my review's probably not going to be good :lol: anyway, let us first deal with the actual poem, then I'll go ...

I was 2-3. My mum taught me, we would go rather long journeys and holidays that were far away, I would sit in the car and read books aloud to ...

I like it too. It's short and simple, it carries meaning without being too deep and it doesn't beat around the bush with huge descriptions. That said, it's lovely for ...

Hotaru, your plot sounds extremely interesting. Not sure if I'd have time to work on it with you, which would be unfair on you but I'd really like to, so ...

Hi everyone :D I've been away for ages, but I'm back :) So I'll get to these today (hopefully) anyone else? x

Evi :) I've been gone for ages :( so here's Kirsten's first review in ages :) Let's start with the actual piece of writing [quote]The flower was drenched in teardrops. ...