LostMagi42

Hello! I am here to add a second opinion, although it will probably be much like whatever opinion came before it. Spelling: I found no spelling mistakes, but they were ...

Hello again! I found this part of the increasingly amazing tale sad, and I now begin to pity the main characters. I see another rapidly approaching death, and Ive braced ...

Hello! It is review day, august 2011, and what better to do than to review a novel, or a fantasy novel with an amazing start at that? I love the ...

Hello! I loved this piece, and cannot wait to read the second part. The only issue I had was as follows: I walked to my locker and opened it get ...

Hello! This piece caught my attention from the title, and is the first piece tonight that i havent had to quote for errors. The first section, spelling, gets an A+. ...

Hello! I think I may have reviewed part 1, but I am not sure. Anyways, I loved this piece, and It left me waiting for a third, one that filled ...

Hello! For a first chapter, This is marvelous. I love the way you switched genres. At first, I thought it was going to be a romance story, but I quickly ...

Hello. The only thing in the Entire piece that could be changed is as follows: I believe that the sun will arrive tomorrow. I believe that the stars will glisten ...

Okay! It has been brought up to me that This is taking a while to get the desired number of players to start. I will now ask that all who ...

I absolutely love this story. Great job. *Applause* First off, the spelling and grammar portion of this gets an A+. There is nothing that I found wrong here. Second, for ...

I was wandering along, when all of a sudden there was this vat of something blocking my way. I sniffed it, and it smelled, odd. I then turned away and ...

I knew something was wrong when I felt Robbin flashing me and her back towards the diner. I reached a telepathy link to the spot where we had been on ...

How about GIANT cherry bombs filled with peanut butter, hmmm?

ok. I am now going to put it into list format, including the available spots left. once we hit 15, Ill set a deadline.

First off, the spelling and grammar section had nothing wrong with it. Second, This story is beyond too short and too vague, even though it technically counts as a short ...