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Re: Have you ever met a YWSer?
Yeah I've met Sianniiee xx
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: The Gryphon's Egg(started/open!)
Hey there my name is Lorna and I would like to join your story! I'm new to this whole storybook thing too so maybe we can learn together :) I ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: This Night Is Ours
Just so you know ... I'm not very good at writing reviews! So Please don't be offended or annoyed that I didn't write much. I Like the way you have ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: A Small Slice Of My Life x
Hello there Jabba! Hee hee hee you made me blush!! Talented .... not ... really :L Your awesome toooo!!!!! As soon as I finish this one special piece of poetry ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: The sky - blue sky
This is a great poem. There were only 2 flaws that I could find... 1. Where are the emotions?? Most poems have loads of emotion in them .... but if ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Shake it off off off.
If you dont mind me asking ....... What type of writing is this? (poem , story , song ect) I think that its pretty deep .... but not too deep. ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Oneirophobia
In My first glance at this piece of writing I see that Your choice of words is amazing. You use harsh sharp words such as "cancer" and "soul" ..... Mixed ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: My lonely letter.
First thing that strikes me is how your emotions at the time of writing are all there ... your emotions are clear and bold. "I hurt so many people lately, ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Hell plays with Heaven
That Was Brilliant! In my opinion ... it was very detailes and moving. But there is always room to improve!! Lorna XX p.s this is my 3rd review!!
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Dream Beach
AHHHHHH HOW DO YOU DELETE THIS?????
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Dream Beach
Hello !! This is a piece of photography that I took at my local beach. I was trying to angle the camera so that the cliffs got into the shot. ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: A Small Slice Of My Life x
Hello everyone! My name is Lorna or Lornydoo. I am 14 years old. I Live in England. I have been writing for as long as I can remember! And everyday ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Finding Light
Hey there ! My name is Lorna and Im a newbie to YWS . So I would like to try to get involve in your storybook. Name: Azealia Wintares Nickname/Likes ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Child Warrior
WOW! Ok first thing that hits me is the sense of pure emotion. Its so briliantly deep.Shows every tiny feeling. Amazing! Then as I read on I get sucked into ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Music Is Her Heart - Need a partner
Ok Well .... I am Trying to start a joint story called "Music is in her heart" . Its about a girl called Azealia Winters who plays the piano ... ...
Oct 25, 2011