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ok so I'm gwen and her dog?

Yes yes I would ... could you send me the links please??!!

I can't remember what happened! I think I blacked out.... Slowly I woke up and saw amber lunging towards Delirumorsus with a simple kitchen knife. I shout " Don't amber ...

Hello there. This definitely has an eerie feel to it... It's got a very good rhyming scheme ;3 Lorna xx

I stare in horror at the angry creature in front of me.... It's then that I turn and run towards amber. " RUN!!! RUN GET OUT OF HERE!!! There's a ...

I go back into the kitchen and find amber looking worried and trapped . She seems to be looking back and forth ... was she trying to find a way ...

I don't know what I was thinking! Letting him off with the bill ! I must be coming down with something .... But before I left him to eat his ...

Hello there, My first impressions of this poem were how deep and dramatic it is ;3 Then as I read on I realise that it is much more then that ...

The man or thing .... orders a some raw meat?! Raw meat?? That's a very unusual request .... Unless your a gryphon. I stand there for a second taking in ...

Hello there, When I saw the name of your poem I was thinking about a completely different type of poem but you surprised me with this ! I believe that ...

Another customer enters .... he isn't human .... But I'm not sure what he is?! I can see that amber is busy so I slowly approach the whatever it is..... ...

Hello everyone , Today I have written a poem about my best friends slow depression and heartbreak. A Sad story which has left her depressed for life. All Reviews accepted ...

Hello Sianniiee ;3 , First Impressions: -The first thing that hit me was the use of emotion in the song :) Like/dislike: - I like this song because it is ...

As I begin to make a cup of coffee to replace the last one , I see a young man walk in with a newpaper in his arms. I automatically ...

I'm completely shocked at the amount of mayhem and mess one tiny little creature can create. For I while ,not knowing how to respond to such an odd question , ...