Lornydoo

Hello there, WOW! First things first .. if this was your first poem then WOW! ... My first poem was pants compared to this ... ;3 I can really relate ...

Hello there, The first thing that dragged me here is the title .... as you could probably see from my own style of writing I love this type of poetry ...

As this is your first piece of poetry I say well done! As a first piece it both captures and interests the reader. Brilliant story and emotion . Love how ...

Hello there, I enjoyed reading this poem because it is so similar to my own writing style .... Short sweet and to the point... I Love the emotion and spirit ...

Hello there, I loved this poem .. its short sweet and to the point ... just how I mostly write! The only fault I could find was how the poem ...

Hello there fellow writers, I realise that it's been a while since my last entry so I have decided to post a poem that a made a couple months back ...

I'm so out of breath that I barley notice the guy with the sword come in .... He smiles at me an amber ..... both gasping for air after our ...

yeah just edited it .... ;3

OH sorry!! Came in late and forgot where we were!!! .... WIll edit!!

Holly Day two I walk into the school with my head held low .... don't want to cause any attention .... not now anyway ... Not now that I've bunked ...

Hello there Sianniiee , I have to say your photography skills are AMAZING! Well done on this one .... I love the glowing effects and the way that the girl ...

Thank you for entering this marvelous piece of writing into my competition ;D xxx

I could see amber call her gryphon back ..... I can see the harsh look in her eyes as she and aiofe launch at the wildercat... I just stand there ...

sorry I can't do this ... the plot is too complicated for me right now as I have alot going on at home .... :L

I'm so confused that I drop the knife and sit down for a second . "wait ... I'm so confused ...... Amber? ..... My Head .... It .... Huurrrr" My ...