LordLoredaen

(This poem won a third-place award at a competition, and I still don't know how it did so, for I consider it one of my not-so-good works!) The Terrors of ...

Ok, I don't have the time for a full review but I'm just going to say that it's the best non-rhyming poem I've ever read!!!!

Really good story, mate!! So, you are going to continue it, right?

Ok, this is my first short-story, and indeed my first story of tragedy. Well, there's a first for everything, I suppose... Deception on the Viledee The dark was deep as ...

I have to agree, great story but very rushed. I quote Treebeard "Don't be hasty". Also, please start a new paragraph when someone is talking! It made it extremely hard ...

Ok, due to the fact that I have virtually no time right now I'm going to make this short and simple. write the next chapter and get it up here ...

What is up with the "101 Tips for Writers"? Where'd it go?? Has it been discontinued???

Escape from Loredaen Hall Chapter 23 - Passeth the Devil's Tongue Tom crept down the hall, wincing slightly as his foot fell upon a loose floorboard, which issued a resistant ...

Intriguing story!! Can't wait to read more!! Though I did spot a few grammatical errours, such as lack of commas and word usage. But besides those couple of small errours ...

I really enjoyed this poem!! Being a musician myself, it got to me in a way. Now what I like in a poem is when it creates a mental picture ...

You use a very... interesting rhyming scheme. Other than that I like your use of words, though the images the poem created in my head were a bit abstract and ...