LordLoredaen

All in all, intriguing story!! Just the kind of think I myself like to read on occasion! Though there were a number of grammatical errors that I noticed, though in ...

Hiya! I really need someone to review this: It's one of the only chapters in my novel that I'm not sure about. Thanks! LordLoredaen

Ok, sorry, this is a quick review, so I'm just going to say my praises, and maybe later let loose my critics. I LOVE this!! By my Faith in Christ ...

I accidentally submitted more works than I have reviews, so I need to delete some of my works. How do I do that????

You know, my best friend is very much like you, and I mean very much like you! Heavens sake, you could be twins (bar the looks). Though I have to ...

On terms of "masterpieces of our time", this isn't anywhere close. However, on terms of "Most Kick-butt hilarious thing on this side of the Moon", this is up in the ...

All-in-all a very intriguing story!! I always love reading about Atlantis! A good subject. Can't wait to read the next two chapters!! You have my avid attention! I love how ...

"Not that good"????? It's quite the opposite, my friend. To be concise you have surpassed my pitiful excuse for drawing skills by an estimation of 35.9 million miles! That might ...

Shina, you're advice is worth more than a solid gold exact size replica of the Lady of Liberty!

I agree with you both, this one really needed work. But do keep in mind this poem is ancient. I wrote it like two year ago!

Heavens I'm notorious with periods!!! I'll get to changing that immediately! Yeah, the asterisks were in the first version which I printed out for a competition... so I forgot to ...

Whoops!! Forgot the period! Yeah, you may have had some trouble understanding some words because for this poem I did this thing where I selected ten random words from a ...

A Jewish Duet As abalone clings The cabaletta lingers, The Ealdorman sings His gaberdine in his fingers. They sing Jabberwocky songs; A cabala tune it doth sound, As the leavy ...

(One of my earliest works!) The Hunter He trod his way down the byway, That wound its way through the glen, The Geese overhead on their flyway, His gun cock ...

(Just something I wrote on the spur of the moment) Praise for Food Praise be to God for honey sweet, Which spread upon toast I gratefully eat. Maybe with butter ...