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Re: "Escape from Loredaen Hall" chap. 1: The Letter
Okay I have now written a satisfying prologue for this novel, which shall be up in a bit. Hope that it will be satisfying...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Missing
That was a great story! Very well constructed, and it didn't bore me! I just want to know exactly what happened at the end. Are you saying that her best ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]
Um.... what if I don't have any food?
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: The English Ladye and Her Knight
Copy and paste the following in your browser if you have trouble reading the Scottish dialect: The English Ladye and Her Knight Cast: Sir Calum Macleod of Skye Lady Elizabeth ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Lithium
I love this!!! It's really good! The flow of your writing is pretty much unbroken, though at the end you rushed it a teeny tiny bit. Also, the last sentence ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: "Escape from Loredaen Hall" chap. 1: The Letter
Ok, I'm posting this because of some requests on my last post (click here ), so I'm going to post the first five chapters or so... NOTE: this is completely ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: "Escape from Loredaen Hall" chap. 23
Thank you all for your reviews!! I really appreciate them! Now I'm going to explain some things that you guys didn't understand: Mairi's accent changes depending on her emotions; e.g. ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Twilight : The real story
Ok, I thought it was funny, only one teeny tiny problem : There was waaaaaay too much swearing!!!!!!! I mean, it's kind of unnecessary. And, believe it or not, some ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: "Escape from Loredaen Hall" chap. 23
I did??? Was it somewhere in the dialogue? If so, I did it on purpose.
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Author and Character
Hahahahahaha!!!! *falls off chair in a fit of uncontrollable laughter* Oh my gods, mate, that was bloomin' hilarious!!! You know, it's kinda funny, I do something like that with my ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: I know why the caged one...
Brilliant!! A work of genius!! A masterpiece of this meagre time!!! 'S math sin!! 'S e, 's math sin agus sin!!!!! Wonderful! Loved it! (though there were a few times ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 7.
Angels-Symphony said: Emma! Like I've said, and many other people have said, you're a great writer. But there is one thing you need to work on. The plot is too ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Another of Sesshomaru
Wow! Really nice!! All-be-it not as good as the original, but still really good! I also have an idea for you: You said you weren't that good at original drawings, ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Sasuke
I like it! (even though it's semi-old). The water effect is quite nice, though maybe where the water is trickling from the sides of his face the outline of his ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: My first ink drawing.
Yes indeed, very good! I agree, try doing a little bit more shading, besides that, I like it!
Jun 11, 2009
