LordLoredaen

Well, it has been a while! I cannot believe it has been over a year since I was last on this site, time does fly! I've got some more chapters ...

Well I'm back (again), with the intention of sticking around this time, haha! Wow, I haven't been on here since December of 2010! Well, hopefully I'll be able to keep ...

Wow, this is pretty good! The title was especially appealing to me because I just happen to be a harpist, although very little of this applies to me (being much ...

I like the use of Gaelic. :) I'm really wondering just if the translations were necessary, if maybe they could be left up the the reader's imagination. I know that ...

@ Stella Thomas Thanks for your nit picks! Here's just an informative response: In concerns to the Gaelic thing... well, I'm not an Irish Gaelic expert.... I really can't speak ...

Poisoned. “ Croi, stad .”* Flecks of dull light fell from her hand and into the bowl over which it was posed as the last of the strange words were ...

Very well-written! I personally can't wait to see what this story has in store for the future! Write on, my friend, write on!!! ~LordLoredaen

Wow, this was great! I really enjoyed it, and, as far as I could tell, minimal grammatical or spelling mistakes! The only thing I really noticed was the Latin thing: ...

Ooh! This is good! Just the kind of fiction that I like! I do hope you write more! Definite promise, really definite! Now.... on to the nitpicks: The girl takes ...

This is looking pretty intriguing! I await more! Okay, on to the critique! Most of all this tree hide history This hide should be hid . no one has ever ...

Interesting story going on here! I personally never watched Legion of Superheroes.... but I did recognise some of the names. Okay, I personally didn't see much wrong, except for your ...

Yeah, got a bit of writer's block on this story.... hope to get back to it soon!

Those are a lot of help, thanks!

All-in-all, good story! You seem to know what you're talking about, which is always a good thing when writing a fanfic. Ok, on to critiques: Jedi Temple, here I come, ...

Today, 1:11 PM: (my time zone) As you noted, the lined paper is sorta distracting and takes away from the sketch. I also think his left earlobe thingy shouldn't have ...