Lora

...the idea of the poem was good. but like Whence said, it should be more fresh...i don't know, i liked how the world's problem came into this poem...but it didn't ...

I agree...i think that i would enjoy this much better as a story. not that it wasn't good as a poem, but i think that....oh who really cares what i ...

* this poem is a bit longer than my last, so i hope that it's better. it is still a work in progress, so please give me advice so that ...

hmmm....i liked it well enough. actually it's probally better than some of mine! (that's true) i almost didn't really like the rhythm...i'm not to sure why, but i didn't really ...

Thanks... I have longer poems in the work, but i'm rather picky to the ones i'm thinking about posting. So thank you, and i hope that you will read my ...

Yeah, i agree, the rhythm was hard to get up on, but i liked the fact that you were trying to get the raw, shattered feeling in it. maybe you ...

Lo Ciento! no, you're right...i did spell disapearing wrong...great... it wasn't really meant to be to long. i don't like poems that drag things on to much, so i like ...

it was ok...but hey, i'm no genius either when it comes to poetry. i don't know, it was just a bit confusing to me. it seems that it should actually ...

* this is something that i wrote quite awhile ago when i was going through some things...i'm not the best.* The memories these bruises make are like the wounds themselves, ...

i liked it very well enough. i understand that it was and english assingment, but i wish you would re-write it so that it would be a bit more descriptive. ...

:D i know i read the first chapter i think in school, right? ( though your handwriting is awful!....but that's besides the point.) that means that i have missed chapter ...

i really liked this, there were a few typos, but we all make mistakes! it was really nice, and, oh i don't know, it kind of just stood out for ...

Hey, this poem just doesn't do it for me. i think that it may be the rhyming, but i'm no expert either. just try to let it out more...oh geez, ...

Gracias everyone! i'll get things posted asap! i hope you like them...i'm not the best, so don't expect much

Hello, everybody! Ma name's Lora - actually it's Laura, but I'm trying to hide my identity from internet stalkers. :D . I love Kylan, who got me to join this ...