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Re: When We Grow Up - Chapter One
hi LooneyPandaxx here! i really liked first paragraph because it was really intreeging and i wanted to read more. the only problem was that the sentences wer too long, you ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Bloom
hi! LooneyPandaxx here! i thought this piece was sad but totaly perfect! you could make it into a novel aswell. i think its really nice and it touched me inside. ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Raw
at first i thought i thought the punctuation needed work but in the end i realised why you decided to let it go and not use it. i thought the ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: You don't care
hiyya LooneyPandaxx here!!! i really liked your song i thought it had quite a lot of feeling in it and this might be good as song ideas for the future! ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Sing
hiyya its LooneyPanda here!!! i loved your poem. there was good emotion in it and it was quite true as i do sometimes sing myself! :D
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Broken
hi LooneyPandaxx here!!! OMG this piece is AWESOME it touched my heart and almost made me cry, it was moving. I loved it!!!
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Music is Freedom
I really liked this piece as a hopeful music artist and thought the words really came from the heart. i thought there were no bad points to it! Its AWESOME!!! ...
Aug 24, 2011
