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Re: me
This isn't that bad, the rhyming is alright. But I suggest you work on it a bit. A little touch up on the grammer wouldn't hurt. Keep working on it ...
Apr 7, 2005 -
Re: surreality (a poem)
The numbers have to stay. I'm glad that you're not gonna take them out. The poem needs them. I love this. In my dreams I can write like this. It's ...
Apr 7, 2005