LonelyDragon

This isn't that bad, the rhyming is alright. But I suggest you work on it a bit. A little touch up on the grammer wouldn't hurt. Keep working on it ...

This was very well done. And Shadow Knight, everyone approaches every poem differently, where you may laugh, others may cry. Some poems are written so strongly one way that you ...

I didn't really like this, sorry. But you shouldn't be asking us to keep our critism to a minimum. That makes me not want to read your poem. :cry: The ...

The numbers have to stay. I'm glad that you're not gonna take them out. The poem needs them. I love this. In my dreams I can write like this. It's ...

I really liked this. Brings back memories. Though, maybe you could expand it? "but instead, we found worthless projector slides and empty cans to kick around while we waited on ...

This is...interesting. It reminds me of things I've randomly written into one of my many random notebooks. Silly, but it kinda pulls it off. On another note, my Mother had ...

I remember you Griffinkeeper and I'm pretty sure I remember you Shadow Knight. I was Redparakeet there for a while before I added the 's'. It's gonna be kinda hard ...

Hey, I just joined... I haven't been able to find a good poetry site in a long time. I was on TYWC, but I stopped being a frequent visitor there ...